Hi nice work so far ;-)
Do go to The Flagship Eclipse detachment forum, here you can see others WIP threads and the CRL : http://www.theflagshipeclipse.com/forum ... f-version/
It is difficuelt to see the details on your pics - when you take the approval pics, do remember to stand in front of a plain background with good light.
I agree with your own points on things that needs to be fixed. I´ve some comments :
Your "ears" needs to be bigger, creating a more sharp frame at the top of the mask. -I have a plan for that. Do you have any input on how much bigger? I'm guessing on 2-3 cm viewing the reference pictures.
The visible spot between your tunic and mask needs to be fixed with black fabric. -I have a plan for that.
Your cape is way to long, it has to be around 5 cm from the ground and be heavily weathered. -I have by intention made it way to long so I have margins for tattering.
Do you have 2 tunics and 2 skirts ? -Yes! I will try to visualize that better in the approval pics. The outer one needs a small arm fix yet tho. Forgot about that
The outerskirt needs to be visible shorter than the innerskirt = floorlenght or hangs no more then 2 cm from the ground. Needs heavy weathering on both skirts. -Which one should be floor length/2 cm? The crl say same for both. Inner or outer? And how much shorter? -Weathering planed.
Outer tunic needs weathering at the bottom. -Weathering planed.
Are your sleeves quilted ? -Yes! I will try to visualize that better in the approval pics.
Do your belt have the screws/rivets to "hold" the smaller belt in place ? -Yes! I will try to visualize that better in the approval pics.
Gloves needs to be form fitted. -That is planned.
Best regards from a costume and staff mentor over at the TFE ;-)